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Follow-on On the display board, groups can put up a typed version of their ‘drama’ alongside the written version in Box 51. Note The activity moves from comprehension via discussion and reconstruction, to expression, since students have to transfer their understanding of narrative to the creation of a direct representation of it. 9.6 What are they saying? Aim To develop a playscript from a fiction extract Focus Vocabulary will depend on the texts chosen; spoken language derived from written (direct from indirect or reported speech) Level Intermediate–Advanced Time At least one class hour Preparation You need to find an extract from a novel or short story which has potential for dialogue, and which can be broken up into a number of fragments. Box 52 provides some examples. Procedure 1 Divide the class into multiples of three (if you use stories with three episodes). Explain that each group will have a part of the text, and that they will have to rewrite their fragment as dialogue plus stage directions. You may need to show how this is to be done: Lakshmi accompanies him to the street. They stand by his car for a moment. Dick: It was lovely to meet you. Lakshmi: It was for me too. When … (she hesitates) Dick: Sorry? Lakshmi: Oh, nothing. Dick: Lakshmi, when can we meet again? Lakshmi: Oh, Dick. I don’t know. It’s my father … 2 Give out a different extract to each group. Allow up to 30 minutes for them to read and discuss it, and to write out their part of the playscript. 3 Each group performs its dialogue dramatisation for the rest of the class, in order from a) to c). If more than one group has the same extract, all the a) extracts perform together, then all the b) extracts, etc. Drama Techniques 200 Box 52 Example 1 a) The police report said that he met her outside the station. They spoke for a few minutes. Then they got into a taxi. b) The taxi driver told us that the couple talked a lot, in whispers. She was showing him a letter. They seemed very tense. c) In the café, the man and woman got into an argument. She kept waving a letter at him. He seemed very angry. Suddenly she got up, spilling her coffee over him, and ran out of the café. Example 2 a) The three men were sitting by a lake. They were fishing. They were boasting about all the big fish they had caught in the past. b) Suddenly, one man’s line goes tight. He is very excited, and pulls in – an old boot. The others laugh. Then the second man pulls in – an old bicycle wheel. They all laugh at him too. Then the third man pulls in – a dead dog! They decide not to tell anyone at the pub about their catch of the day! c) In the pub, the three men are boasting about the size of the fish they caught today. (Of course, they threw these enormous fish back into the lake! ) No one believes them. Example 3 a) While Lakshmi busied herself preparing lunch, Nagarajan told Dick that she was a widow. He had arranged her marriage to a boy from the same community, a computer software specialist. They had married at the boy’s home town, near Udipi, when she was twenty-two. By then she had completed her MA in English literature. It was time for babies, grandchildren to warm old people’s hearts, and to justify their years of work and struggle. But no children came. And, five years later Girijan, her husband, had died in a motorcycle accident. Working from/into texts 201 Box 52 continued b) Nagarajan’s confused conversation was interrupted when Lakshmi brought them lunch. It was simple vegetarian food – rice, dal and vegetable masala with chappaties – but the aroma was delicious. Lakshmi, in traditional Indian style, did not eat with them – she would eat later. c) It was some time before Lakshmi returned to clear the dishes. She said nothing and went about her work with her eyes lowered, not looking at Dick. As she was about to leave the room, Dick asked her, ‘How is your father? What has happened to him?’ d) Dick left her father slumped in an old armchair in the corner of the darkening room, still smoking. The sound of his coughing followed Dick out. Lakshmi accompanied him to the street. His car was waiting. They stood for a moment before he got in. ALAN MALEY He Knows Too Much © Cambridge University Press 2005 Follow on 1 In a later class, you might have groups performing the whole sequence as a complete play. They could add a concluding scene. 2 The way that speech is rendered in writing is far more complex than most of the simplified grammar books we use would have us think. If it is appropriate, you could analyse the way speech is dealt with in these texts. Note The dialogue can sometimes be retrieved from the text. Sometimes, however, dialogue can be added where it contributes to a better flow of the conversation. 9.7 Stop press Aim To develop dramatisation from short newspaper articles Focus Vocabulary will depend on articles chosen; language of discussion and evaluation; spoken dialogue Level Intermediate and above Time Two class hours Preparation You need to find a short newspaper article about an incident involving several people, which can form the basis of a dramatisation. Box 53 provides an example. Make three copies for each group of six. Drama Techniques 202 Procedure First class hour 1 Explain to students that they will be developing a short play from an incident described in a newspaper article. When they get the article, they should answer the following questions for themselves, making notes as they do so: • Who are the people involved? Make a list. • Where does this incident take place? • When did it happen? • What exactly happened (and how)? List the events in order of occurrence. • What were the consequences of this incident? 2 Give out copies of the article to each group of six (one copy between two). Allow 15 minutes for the questions in step 1. Then conduct whole- class feedback to make sure everyone has understood the article. 3 Groups work out a scenario based on the facts they have noted. They should decide how many scenes they will have, who will be in each scene, and what will be said and done. They should include scenes even if they are not explicitly described in the article, e.g. the scene between father and son when they first discover they are cut off by the tide; the scene after they have been rescued, etc. Allow 20 minutes for this. Then conduct class discussion comparing different groups’ ideas. Second class hour 4 Groups prepare dialogue for each of their scenes. Each group then performs its play for the whole class. Note This is quite a demanding activity and does need two lessons to complete if it is to be done properly. The stages are important: first, clearly understanding the incident in its full context; then, mapping out the scenes which will be needed to enact it; finally, putting words in the mouths of the characters. Working from/into texts 203 Box 53 LIFEBOAT CREW RESCUES PAIR FROM ICY RIVER Father and son were ‘minutes from death’ Canterbury Christmas Special w/e 26 Dec, 2003 © Cambridge University Press 2005 Drama Techniques 204 Lifeboatmen faced a race against time to rescue a father and son cut off by a freak tide while out winter fowling. Joe Cranston, of Homewood Road, Sturry, was out with his 11-year-old son Aaron on the remote Slayhills Marsh on the River Medway, near Upchurch on Sunday morning. He sparked a major air sea rescue operation by dialling 999 on his mobile phone and contacting coastguards who launched Sheerness Inshore Lifeboat. At the same time an RAF Sea King helicopter was scrambled from RAF Wattisham in Suffolk. The lifeboatmen found Mr Cranston up to his waist in cold water with the young lad sitting on his shoulders and their two dogs swimming in the water. The high wind combined with the cold weather produced a sub-zero chill factor, lifeboatmen said. Robin Castle, Coxswain of Sheerness Lifeboat said the high-speed rescue craft reached the stranded pair within half an hour of being called. He said, ‘The man andhis son were out wild fowling when they were caught out by a higher-than-usual tide. ‘Mr Cranston was up to his waist in water with the boy on his shoulders. They were cold but none the worse for their ordeal, and the inshore lifeboat was able to pick them up and deliver them to where their car was parked. ‘Mr Cranston was able to ring Dover Coastguard who relayed his call to the operations centre at Clacton who called us out. ‘The unusually high tide and the cold wind meant they could have drowned or been frozen if they had delayed calling for even a few more minutes. It was a life or death race, and because we were quick off the mark, we won.’ Neither Mr Cranston or Aaron needed medical attention but coastguards said they had a lucky escape. By Ian Read